New trends in lifestyles. Activity 3.
Have you ever felt the social pressure of needing to go to parties jut to fit in? Because I believe we all have. Nowadays, teens feel like they have the obligation to go to parties every week; parties which end at 4 am., and in which you are pressured into drinking, dancing or “having fun”, etc.
This topic has turned into a lifestyle for many teens. 6 out of 10 teens go to parties every week, and some of those who don´t, is because their parents won´t let them. Out of these 6 teens who assist, only 3 of them enjoy the mood, music and people who are in there, the other 3, are just there because of social pressure.
Most times, teens feel the obligation of fitting into the “mold” that everyone else is in, and going to parties, drinking, dancing music you probably don´t like, amongst other things.
This has turned into a problem for many teens who do not know what lifestyle they should follow, if the parties and “fun” lifestyle, or the “chill” and “nerdy” lifestyle, because they cannot seem to find a balance between them.
Good work! Careful with the meaning of the word assist, it means help. The word you need is attend. Also, be careful with commas before linking words like because, they are not needed. Grade 98.
ResponderEliminarReflection.
ResponderEliminarWhat I learned from this activity is that social pressure is something really common and everyone can have it sometimes. Although what I really learned is that you do not have to fin into anything, you should just be you. Also, my writing skills improved as well as my vocabulary.